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Tonight, I made a cup of tea and sat down to intentionally savor this, Kimberly. Your writing is always vivid and immersive. And in this piece, I feel your heart--strong and clear--in the love that you and your brother share. Your brother's obvious devotion warms, consoles, and softens the sudden jolt of finding out that you have different birth fathers. 22% shared genes. 100% shared hearts. I'm looking forward to October 14th when this beauty will land in my little black mailbox here in NC.

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Jul 27Edited

How did I miss this chapter! Immediately, like all the others, I am instantly drawn in ,emotions flying as quickly as your pain surfaced to reality. My own heart racing on as I read . Such great writing, Kimberly! Truly. I was reading and saying to myself, who was the fucking dumbass telling you to move out of the road. You seamlessly, brilliantly moved straight into Charlie. His hands, your hands…as I gasped and sighed. I knew you had a cycling accident, but never the details. Your description of impact and endorphin, albeit temporary superpowers are spot on. For many years beginning in the mid 90’s, mountain biking, like skiing, was one of my obsessions. Five times a week, before or after work, I joyfully drove to a local privately owned forest with an endless gnarly trail system. I would test my skills , climbing ridiculously steep pitches, practicing tight rock filled corners, sure I fell, but never more than a bruise. But it did not happen there. Paul and I drove 4 hours just to go to a nephew’s high school graduation, combining it with a bike trip on 50 miles of horse /mtn bike trail system seemed like an excellent idea. Suffice it to say, the story involved a wet bike tire slipping of a large log , falling 3 miles in, hearing and feeling the KLUNK and me yelling I think I broke my leg… being left there while Paul goes biking and running up the trail screaming for help, a coyote, a horse ride , ambulance, a plea to not cut my favorite shorts off of me (“save the shorts!”)and a tib fib/ spiral fracture, full cast to half and such=10 months later. But a fractured pelvis and a cracked helmet? ( I am letting out an audible exhale).

Congratulations on the magazine excerpt!

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